Day Passes
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Day passes
night ensues
chores the same
as yesterday
and the years pass
hating my dishes
copyright/all rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2011
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I hate dishes too
great poem and to the point...thanks to Jami for sharing and thanks to you for writing it! Voted up!
Thank you jami,Cousin Fudd and justateacher! You have made me feel welcome here!
Ha ha, yes I hate dishes! What a chore I do not love! :)
Thank you Hattie!
I love the picture...and as some one else said, short and sweet. I love poetry, but don't read or write much of it anymore.
Thank you then, for choosing to read mine Enlydia!!
Another quick power punch.. bravo! You have a very concise, unique style!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!
Amazing that so much can be conveyed or hinted at in so few words...and to me at least "dishes" can represent so many different things. I really, really like this.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! Greatly appreciated!
LOL I hear you :)
Thanks Susan!!
I guess you heard me yelling at my daughter to do the dishes... love it
Hate the dishes--thank you for the read!
your dishes threw me for a loop LOL good poem
Thank you for the read--awkward --the dishes?
yes! so so good!
Thank you PDX!
As an artist, may I say the painting was perfect. We can't do them like that anymore. We can't afford to take the time. As far as the poem . . . it is perfectly balanced like haiku. Content . . . it's the same all over.
Thank you so much WDCurry!
Very nice, thank you Audrey!
Thank you newday---
How profound!
I like the simplicity of it. yet it says a lot. Well done!
Indeed. I agree with Andrea!
I love my dishwasher and your poem!!
Thank you Sunshine!
Dishes? What dishes? Don't you have a house spouse?
LOL
Love it!
Love from Lola
I might be the house spouse--thanks for reading!
i hate doing laundry. I don't mind the dishes though
I hate them both! Thanks for the read PDX!
...well if it's gonna make you feel any better I'll come over and do your dishes because your writing is so very eloquent and I would put you in the world class of a writer's writer.
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Thank you Epigramman! (Blush)
well, it's folding the laundry i hate. I don't mind throwing them into the machine.
very good i hate dishes too.
Thank you Jesusmy joy--we had a lot of family over for Thanksgiving and it was an endless line of dishes!!
A reality for so many women.
I have a dishwasher, so I don't hate my dishes so much. Voting this Up and Beautiful.
voting up and awesome.. great poem hate dishes to.. LOL
Debbie
Thank you Vinaya, alocsin and Deborah--I suppose there are chores that we like more and those we like less--it just seems like a thankless job to me--
jami l. pereira 6 months ago
I voted up ! flows well ,short ,sweet and to the point .Thanks for the read ! :)And i shared it with my followers !:)